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 SC2: Angels of War, Malaysian made short story

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TSDuskBin.Marksman
post Apr 4 2011, 05:14 PM, updated 15y ago

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Hi, here's a short story that I've written about SC2. I'm just posting it here for fun and to get more opinion in improving my writing skills.

Here's a tidbit of the story.

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Website version

or you can read the PDF version here at (http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/10/22/308192/Angels of War.pdf) <- cant seem to hyperlink it for some reason.


Warning: Foul language present. Enjoy the read rclxms.gif
hazairi
post Apr 4 2011, 05:40 PM

Look at all my stars!!
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marines..

totally OP!
SiewKaiz
post Apr 4 2011, 05:44 PM

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Nandeska
post Apr 4 2011, 06:00 PM

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lol not bad not bad
ROTiJOHN
post Apr 4 2011, 06:27 PM

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Hi, I am Tan. I work as marauder with a very cheap pay RM15/day. And I fark the guy upside down if the guy call me lolder
Calvin Seak
post Apr 4 2011, 11:59 PM

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marauder with six packs

so lan c ar take out shirt show everyone in facebook
jeffvip
post Apr 5 2011, 09:41 AM

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how many days u required to write this? very good indeed, if you can add 2-3 pictures, it will be great rclxms.gif rclxms.gif
aLertz
post Apr 5 2011, 03:10 PM

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naissss story !!!
where can i find a lolder wif rifle? laugh.gif
gladfly
post Apr 5 2011, 03:58 PM

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Ahahaha...TS can start a mini series ka?

Cool story yo
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post Apr 5 2011, 05:03 PM

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Sounds a little like starship trooper damn you marks no more cod 4 O.o
TSDuskBin.Marksman
post Apr 5 2011, 06:21 PM

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On and off , about a week or so to write, type, edits and stuff. It'll be my only SC2 work since I'm busy with a lot of everything else. Thanks for the comments ;D
jeffvip
post Apr 5 2011, 06:30 PM

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QUOTE(DuskBin.Marksman @ Apr 5 2011, 06:21 PM)
On and off , about a week or so to write, type, edits and stuff. It'll be my only SC2 work since I'm busy with a lot of everything else. Thanks for the comments ;D
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Wait for your 2nd episode dude, nice english
mules
post Apr 5 2011, 06:45 PM

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cool story dude, u gave that cheap dirt 50 mineral marine a new light biggrin.gif
keretapir
post Apr 5 2011, 07:43 PM

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waiting to see what his description on the introduction of stimpacks..
will he be addicted? laugh.gif
quest_5692
post Apr 5 2011, 09:23 PM

yo chick, im not buaya
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QUOTE(mules @ Apr 5 2011, 06:45 PM)
cool story dude, u gave that cheap dirt 50 mineral marine a new light biggrin.gif
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check out starcraft 2 FPS custom game, thats OP marine imo. 1 marine can finish the whole zerg swarm.
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post Apr 6 2011, 10:55 AM

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QUOTE(quest_5692 @ Apr 5 2011, 09:23 PM)
check out starcraft 2 FPS custom game, thats OP marine imo. 1 marine can finish the whole zerg swarm.
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i recalled u havent finish the campaign... so u must be quite confuse bout what DuskBin write sometimes... FYI, it is actually the last campaign
SiewKaiz
post Apr 6 2011, 11:07 AM

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he just a lucky marine that live and tell the tale~ tons of marines at ladder everyday~
quest_5692
post Apr 6 2011, 07:59 PM

yo chick, im not buaya
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wow, i dno this story is related to the campaign.
TSDuskBin.Marksman
post Apr 6 2011, 10:01 PM

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lol there wont be a second episode. It's a one shot or one chapter short story. yawn.gif
SiewKaiz
post Apr 7 2011, 09:06 AM

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awww too bad then~

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