this topic is definitely help ne alot

i am studying my acca course and will be graduate soon in a half year time.
im decide to apply for a job before i sit for my final exam...

as a fresh graduate like me is worrying about i got no working experience or any participated activities to enlighten my cover letter to the reader.
i had prepared my cover letter as follow, did anyone can help me to correct it or give some advises to me??

very much appreciate and thanks in advance


Dear Ms. ABC,
My interest in the position of xxx has prompted me to forward my resume for your review and consideration.

(my academic)In last x years, I had completed the fundamental level of (ACCA) which is paper A to G in time and without a delay from June 2007 till December 2009. I will be sitting and accomplish for my final papers of Y and Z which is in professional level at XYZ college to be held on 2010.

(my objective)It is my ambition to become an Accountant since secondary school day and now I’m trying my best to achieve it. I am presently looking for a job opportunity as a start up for my ambition and my career to become a chartered accountant in x years time.

Apart from being a proactive learner, I was actively involved in extra-curricular activities inside and outside of campus.....(some activities in the campus) It’s has served me well in nurturing my leadership, communication skills and team player ability which are essential to succeed in the working world and should be serve to give you an idea not only of my past achievements but of my potential for making a significant contribution to your company.
Please find my CV enclosed providing details of my qualification and experiences.

I believe that I will be able to perform best while growing together with your organization.

Thank you for your attention.
Yours faithfully,