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This post has been edited by kelvin_hata: Apr 19 2010, 12:23 AM

WOW! nice pics bro~model looks like cyndi wang...

must be quite skillful to not get urself taken when shooting in the mirror..=D

btw..ur first pic...what iso did u use? model's face seemed grainy..or maybe u editted it?

my noob 2 cents.=D

all use ISO200

ya..editted due to underexposed

This post has been edited by kelvin_hata: Apr 18 2010, 01:34 AM

naise

ooo..u raised the curves? haha...did u set up lightings or just use natural light or a flashgun?

This post has been edited by zstan: Apr 18 2010, 01:36 AM

too noise after i pump in lot exposure n brightness

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This post has been edited by kelvin_hata: Apr 18 2010, 01:39 AM

I personally liked only the last few pics. If there were numbers to the pics, I could tell you which.

But yeah, only the last few stood out. The beginning shots looked quite normal.

haha... thanks

edited with number.

if the color of picture can be a bit more warmer

pic 7 and 8- the model should look at you

anyway, the model legs was hawt

I liked 9 and 10. 11 could work too but something is just not right.

maybe if switch off the orange bulb of the floor lamp and just using the sunlight from the window, it might have better mood. (#10 #11 #12)

and the both feet also not as long as the one on the #7 #8

i like #2, stirring emotion. Try make the cloth down there a lil bit wet (like just few drips of water) might can create better emotion.

This post has been edited by jayhan: Apr 19 2010, 04:38 PM

haha... i think shooting angle problem

haiz.. the lamp make all feel gone.. T_T



This post has been edited by kelvin_hata: Apr 20 2010, 12:52 AM

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This post has been edited by kelvin_hata: Apr 20 2010, 12:54 AM

K15 is the best i think if it's brighter a bit. Got the ambient light and feeling =D

haha.. izzit.. hmm try tomorrow. lazy now..

hmm i feel that like there is this missing communication btw the model and the camera. is like its nice but macam tak ngam. hmm

13 - would've been nicer with the blinds closed. I see too much of the window frame.

15 - for some reason, her foot in front kinda spoils the pic for me.

16 - you cropped her toes.

17 - best of the 2nd lot you've shown.

haha.. noted and thanks

I like #15, if focus the whole leg part as well will great !

is it just me or d photos r all really quite noisy n grainy ?? but nice pics there overall..=p

Just one simple comment, try not to have different color of lighting in the same photo coz it make the white balance shift quite easily and u won't get consistent WB through out the photo ..

Check out shin chan's work, he practice consistent WB through out one set of photo.

Others like exposure, composition and flash, i think u really need to practice a bit more ...

u dun need to use the flash direct to the model, if possible put it slightly away and trigger it wireless from your camera. That would create more nature and less harsh light.

you can go check some model pics from moko.cc and maybe can get inspired from there? but it's a chinese site.

Ok... Noted with thanks wil be more careful on next shooting.

nice model i would say...