hope you dont mind me asking

do you purposely blow the subject and keep the background dark?

i think the background will look nicer if u bump ur iso to 800

and time to invest in a good diffuser
noticed that ur flash can only light the top half of the model, the lower half are usually dark. my dua cents

ah ok ok
dont worry shoot more and u'll get better

er...its the normal digital compact camera flash "effect"

blown subject and dark background

but your subjects aren't blown la

This post has been edited by XP750: Apr 17 2010, 11:17 PM

well depends whether u like it or not,
its your shooting style anyway.

for me i prefer the background nicely lit