Finally decided to make a gallery to further improve my photography. uploading them on facebook hasnt really helped me in any way.
CnC are most welcomed especially critical comments. thanks for viewing
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This post has been edited by s3r^ph: Feb 16 2013, 04:44 AM

great shot!

admired that no 8.....
others looks fine....

awesome shots, agree with u that facebook won't help since not many ppl will view them and facebook just suck up the quality of the photo

#2 if u change WB or hue maybe will look nice. or juz convert to b&w ;p

i like #6. nice n clean

u made a wise choice. uploading to fb wont do much haha

love every photo here. I wouldn't change anything on #2 either, changing hues is going to just affect colors, which is again preferential. more important is that you caught the lines.

if i were to pick, I'd have to pick the photo I think impacts the leads, and that would be the one of the Tower Bridge. (#3). It could actually look better with color.

it's too bad the 2nd street lamp and part of the grill on pic #6 were imperfect, but then again that actually makes the picture beautiful.

judging by the pics, all using 18-55 lens. IMO your photos are a fine example on why people should focus on taking better photos, not upgrading gears. great effort!

@lovesuckstudio, breaker84
thanks

@psychohew
thanks. yea. i only have a few friends who are interested in photography, so it was always the same fellas who commented on my shots.

@dvlzplayground
thanks. i preferred that WB but itz just my preferrence.

@goldfries
thanks for the comments. i liked the black n white effect on the tower bridge...made it look like an old pic. but itz just my preference. here is the coloured version


#6 is actually quite a dangerous area....the whole time i was there, alot of passer-bys advised me to be careful of robbers. it's so sad that an area with a nice view is so dangerous
btw, i'm actually using a tamron 18-270mm. but yea....i normally use the range between 18-55. too used to using my kit-lens back in msia.

Nice...very nice shot!! Keep the good work!!

i think the colored version nicer. it is preference though.

i was guessing based on EXIF - your shots were all within 18 - 55 range. based on your photos, even 18-55 can do it.

some old shots.
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I love the picture of the tower bridge in colour. I love all of your pictures. You really captured the feel, the still peacefulness, in your photos.

Picture 10..is tha Broga hill?? Very nice...mind to share what PP you use?

thanks =)


yea...Broga hill...love that place. it is a hdr. i played a little with the curves and saturation after merging 3 shots of -1,0 and +1 ev.

I think you use the term "noob" WAY too liberally.

Composition-wise I like #2 and #6 a lot.

This post has been edited by deodorant: Mar 1 2010, 01:46 PM

You have really great pictures here. Nice work!! ^^

well...i see myself as a noob when compared to the many pro photographers in lyn.

thanks. =)

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This post has been edited by s3r^ph: Mar 7 2010, 10:15 PM

No 17 photo really great compo!

I feel like #17 and #18 can be better if the Sun at the angle of 1/3 of the left side. Sort of giving the meaning of the flower is having sun bath, instead of take the tree as background which cannot really bring up any idea (just from me >_<) However it is a great picture still. ^^

thanks

I think u r quite rite. feels like the tree is a distraction. i'll try that shot again if i have time n if the flowers r still there.

very nais series bro!