v1rtual: through my eyes and my lcd monitor (heh), the first picture could use some improvement. the background is lit more than the subject (the model appears underexposed). maybe you could bring up the brightness on the subject. the as for the 2nd picture the model's face is a little too berkilat. maybe burn a little in kedaigambar. I like the poses. this is my observation la. cheers mate!
Photography The Sony Alpha Thread V34!, The Orange Legion
Dec 21 2009, 09:29 PM
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