okay now i remember syurgatertinggi style looks like "Shunjou Shuusuke"

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a cow and a girl playing wrestling.

this is one of my entry for a contest, themed "first love" :

eh wow nice oni girl. XD looks fine to me except her left hand palm/fingers. macam a bit small palm or issit the fingers a bit short. not sure which one.

your dragon girl description is inside another layer? if yes then good xD coz i need to edit that when got the arts to match the design with other people. or we better decide earlier how the format

oni girl too much muscle XD.... the 6 packs is too large for my taste 

wow u sure like red xD and its awesome :3

her right eyes not that timbul though. maybe u can use damn obvious red with some black for effect? but its already awesome actually. just maybe can make it more awesome xD

this oni is not enough "horny"

Uh oh, i dont have a better word to describe this, but i can say, looking good, especially the background 
you mean she look flat

=O that is superb! except her face looks so narrow xD

thats fast D: i like the background. looks real xD but i still think her head not enough width. erm wait someone else comment xD

nah, some places can be refine.

1) always remember, the distance between of eyes at least "1 unit of your eye width". for normal style. same goes to chibi... but can break one, depend how you break it.
2) wing can be more simplify. actually you need refer to digimon's angelmon or any angel/bird type's wing. it is good simple reference.
3) i dont know how you design the sword, but ya i think that angle is a bit awkward.
4) about leg i no comment, i think you sengaja put that style so i didnt mod it.
5) well head part no need explain, you know it well 

why you recolour the hair, it is like 2 different style of your painting that cant blend together 

erm.. lizard girl? xD

forehead line too low, snake too slim, due to the pattern also makes me feel like paper snake body xD
you are doing top down angle right? 

Edit: man, next time check your spoiler tag 

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naah... your body precisely should be looks like centipede more than snake 

agito doesnt mean the pattern style i think. he mean the spaces between the pattern. its too far from each other since its almost to the tip.

the hand i also agree with agito. it look awkward like that. if u still want to do it like that, make the pole bigger. nobody holding something heavy not fully grab xD that style macam holding a paper