for the sake of necro-ing thread, imma post my today's practice doodle

your art improving

necro this thread

necro-ing again~ and ohai people

gundam

I lazy to put complete stuff here so I put sketch only.

Dat feel when this thread is pretty much dead

ask mod enable post count then lol....

waiting you guys contribute la.... no contribute only me what to do.

you cumulative post already god class still need to turn this thread's post countable?

btw wip submission for pixiv oekaki girls


This post has been edited by elcieloultima: Sep 12 2012, 06:08 PM

sum thing wong there
duno where to point out.

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sketches. educational purpose

This post has been edited by Agito666: Sep 12 2012, 04:34 PM

thread seems back to alive, a bit

anyhow.. mecha musume design based on Gundam TR-6

personal opinion hehe, dont take it too serious

from what i feel la:
1) hair volume is too much. hair flow is also bit weird.
2) hand palm could be bigger
3) white cloth is weird as if you colour it tight looks... outline looks doesn't
4) leg is too fat for my taste
5) skirt flow is weird. as if no hand covering/ pressing the skirt who come the person fall from this direction and skirt will go "in" like this without hand pressing? some more this kind of skirt should be "fluffy" like maid skirt right?
6) yor style reminds me the korean-japanese manga artist. Kwang-Hyun Kim
7) face is little too wide for my taste. at least the jaw line.
8) knee cap seems poking out? (need lesser pointy shape i think)
9) otherwise you are very very good in colour

also you need work on "transform" > "wrap" for your stocking texture to make it more 3D. or liquidfy it.

This post has been edited by Agito666: Sep 13 2012, 03:37 PM

hair flow.

that is what i think i should fix.but damn oredi merge liao hard to fix

kantoi wahahaha

fffuuuuu.....guru

i not guru
i good in kutuk people's work only

posting some-- well, see yourself la

Orang yang sudah meninggalkan keobsesannya tidak ingin obeseskan sesuatu lagi. saya sedih

Drawing on my N900 again

no time fix lineart,deadine 17-9 liao just go str8 finish coloring

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Added on October 8, 2012, 2:19 pm

preview for vocaloid book submission,very slow progress,semester baru start but oledi a lot of assignment

This post has been edited by elcieloultima: Oct 8 2012, 02:19 PM