There’s a fan-made 564 chapter I made
“The king’s equal attacks”
Cover page: Zoro sleeping and an ox-like animal looking at him wondering
Whitebeard lands, creating a crater at the spot, and the marines in frond of him look scared to death.
” Do not tremble you fools, after that wound he cant be that fearsome!”
Some marine says: Vice- Admiral Gondar !
Gondar attacks WB wielding an axe-like weapon but WB punches the air and smashes Gondar’s weapon, then smacks his head on the ground. Gondar is beaten with one blow.
Sengoku says that even though he is dying his strengh is like always extraordinary. WB keeps walking in, taking out everyone that gets in his way.
Momonga: This does not look good *sends a pressurised wave with his sword but WB actually takes it without getting more than a scratch*
WB: If you want to hurt me, use more strenght brats !
Scene changes to Luffy running alongside Jimbei.
Luffy: The old man is amazing !
Jimbei: Yes, WB’s strenght’s like no others. But let him deal with them, while we deal with saving Ace *he appears to be thinking of something*
Scene changes again, with Marco closing Crocodile, who is apparently fighting a PX.
Crocodile: What do you want ? *a beam impales him but since he is a logia he doesnt mind*
Marco: How come you dont try to attack pops or any of us all of a sudden ?
Crocodile says something like it’s no use fighting with some1 that got this weakened, and then Marco grins and tells him that there seems to be another reason. Meanwhile WB takes out 2, apparently Vice-admirals, judging by their clothing.
WB: Come on my childer ! We are gonna make it ! Just keep going !
*a figure appears behind Sengoku*
Sengoku: Hmm … it took you too long.
???: My deepest apologies Sir. *vanishes*
As WB reaches very close to the platform he lifts his Bisento.
WB: Everyone prepare to move ! *he is apparently about to unleash a very strong attack but the guy from before appears in front of him and calls “Tekkai” ! blocking the attack in the middle using a big blade*
???: My honor to meet you from so close, the man that was the King’s equal.
WB: *looks annoyed* Who are you … ?!!! *last scene shows WB facial expression going from annoyed to surprised*
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btw which chapter yg ada franky pergi jumpa vegapunk?
bukan dia pergi ke negara yg biku biku?raja dari tempat chopper tu....
x lyn sgt muka dpn
Added on November 12, 2009, 12:54 pmnew makeup chapter
still fun to read ...in fact very fun haha....ada bau2 oda skit
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There’s a fan-made 564 chapter I made
“The king’s equal attacks”
Cover page: Zoro sleeping and an ox-like animal looking at him wondering
Whitebeard lands, creating a crater at the spot, and the marines in frond of him look scared to death.
” Do not tremble you fools, after that wound he cant be that fearsome!”
Some marine says: Vice- Admiral Gondar !
Gondar attacks WB wielding an axe-like weapon but WB punches the air and smashes Gondar’s weapon, then smacks his head on the ground. Gondar is beaten with one blow.
Sengoku says that even though he is dying his strengh is like always extraordinary. WB keeps walking in, taking out everyone that gets in his way.
Momonga: This does not look good *sends a pressurised wave with his sword but WB actually takes it without getting more than a scratch*
WB: If you want to hurt me, use more strenght brats !
Scene changes to Luffy running alongside Jimbei.
Luffy: The old man is amazing !
Jimbei: Yes, WB’s strenght’s like no others. But let him deal with them, while we deal with saving Ace *he appears to be thinking of something*
Scene changes again, with Marco closing Crocodile, who is apparently fighting a PX.
Crocodile: What do you want ? *a beam impales him but since he is a logia he doesnt mind*
Marco: How come you dont try to attack pops or any of us all of a sudden ?
Crocodile says something like it’s no use fighting with some1 that got this weakened, and then Marco grins and tells him that there seems to be another reason. Meanwhile WB takes out 2, apparently Vice-admirals, judging by their clothing.
WB: Come on my childer ! We are gonna make it ! Just keep going !
*a figure appears behind Sengoku*
Sengoku: Hmm … it took you too long.
???: My deepest apologies Sir. *vanishes*
As WB reaches very close to the platform he lifts his Bisento.
WB: Everyone prepare to move ! *he is apparently about to unleash a very strong attack but the guy from before appears in front of him and calls “Tekkai” ! blocking the attack in the middle using a big blade*
???: My honor to meet you from so close, the man that was the King’s equal.
WB: *looks annoyed* Who are you … ?!!! *last scene shows WB facial expression going from annoyed to surprised*
btw which chapter yg ada franky pergi jumpa vegapunk?
bukan dia pergi ke negara yg biku biku?raja dari tempat chopper tu....
x lyn sgt muka dpn
This post has been edited by pal33x: Nov 12 2009, 12:54 PM 
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It's cool but it's wasted if the user can't transform into water/fire/ etc himself. I think that's the logia user's main edge.
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